I like this piece! I think you did a geat job of capturing the emotions of love (or lust?) that can be involved in a one-night stand. That is what it seemed like to me, and I know a lot of people have felt these feelings before, so this poem will be easy to relate to for many.
The diction is good, and the mood is great. I am really impressed with the flow, however it could have been better with puncuation.

Keep up the great work!

Greg!

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]

Thank you very much. Although, it was about how my boyfriend (?) treats me, I can see how it could be about a one night stand.

Ah, upon reading this poem, i dont think he treats you well at all! When your relationship can be mistaken by a stranger for a one-night stand, then you know its not a good one.

Greg!

Hope you can read my work too!

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]

I know, don't think that didn't cross my mind after I read your comment. We're not really all the way together anyway, never will be. Ugh...lol...lot of missing details...I won't bore you with them....

And I did go to your page earlier today and read a couple of your poems, and you are very talented. It's flattering that someone that writes as well as you would compliment one of mine. I was going to post something, but I wanted to read a little more of them first.

Thank you

Thanks a ton for your comment. It was a joy to read your work, as you are very talented as well!

Hope things work out well for you!

Greg!

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To be positive at all times is to ignore all that is important sacred or valuable...
To be negative at all times is to be threatened by ridiculousness and instant discredibility...

-Kurt Cobain [1967-1994]